Petals on the Wind

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Petals on the Wind by V.C Andrews 
Question: Who's perspective is missing? What effect would it have had? Why do you think the author chose not to include it?

Petals on the Wind by V.C Andrews is about the three Dollanganger Dolls trying to find their place in the world after escaping the mother who killed their 4^th Dollanganger Doll, telling that they would need to be hidden until she inherits the millions of dollars her grandfather has. While the two main dolls-Cathy and Christopher- manage to find their place-with the help of their new guardian, Paul Sheffield-while one doll withers slowly, mourning for the 4^th doll who had been her twin, Cory, who had been the closet person with her in the whole world.  

The point of view which the story is told is the dancing doll, Cathy. Cathy is the most bitter of the dolls. She is stuck in the past, wanting revenge for the mother who betrayed them all-especially the child who loved her the most and who Cathy is closest to, Christopher. As she strives through her dancing career, trying to become the best dancer in the world (for personal reasons involving her mother and since she loves dancing), she begins to plan to get revenge on her mother, making sure she is aware of where she is and sending her letters that say something like: ‘Are you still running away from me? Don’t you know yet you can never run fast enough for far enough? Someday I will catch up, and we will meet again. Perhaps this time you will suffer as you made me suffer, and, hopefully, thrice the amount.’ 

Though Cathy’s point of the view on things makes the book interesting, suspenseful, and makes me wanna read it over and over again, I feel that there could be other people who tell the story and still tell the story wonderfully. The first person I think could make it interesting is the Doctor Doll-Christopher. 

I think Christopher could make it just as interesting is because you would get to know what he thinks. His mother betrayed him, he loved his mother, he thought she was perfect, that no one else could be better than her…and then she goes and locks him up in a room, promising him riches beyond beliefs, not letting him go outside, not letting him live a life! Then 3 years later, when they plan to escape, and after Cory-the Dead Doll-died, Chris’s heart is broken. The woman he loved the most killed his little brother and made him suffer at a very young age all for riches which he found out in the end, he and his siblings would have to die so the mom could keep the riches…

The story would show what Chris feels about his mother betraying him. How he feels about when he has to choose becoming a doctor or staying with Cathy (He loves her-they’ve been locked up for 3 years, becoming closer and closer, so, yeah) and Carrie-the dying, mourning little doll, and how he ended up choosing the becoming a doctor. Also how Cathy tries to escape the sinful love they have by marrying Julian (Another famous dancer) then going to New York, then as he dies, she goes and marries Paul (It’s complicated…). Chris, who is so shut up, who mourns more than Cathy though doesn’t show it, who wants his sister to be his and his only, who just can’t stand the fact that his own mother wants to money more than them, no matter what she says. Chris is so expressional with his blue eyes, he get hurt easily; he doesn’t have that mean spark like Cathy…Chris who would have made an excellent person to tell the story of trying to live in the world. 

Another person who would be good to hear from is the mother-Corrine. The mother doll, who made it clear she wanted money more than her own children who loved her so much, who made it clear she cared more for herself than others, the one who killed her own child and tried to get away from it. How did she feel when she put arsenic in the children’s food to kill them slowly? How could she bear it? How could she walk in that room, telling the Dolls that she still loves them and is working hard for them just to get them out when she really was just spending the money she had gained in due time, living the lives the Dolls should have had? How could she do it? How could she betray her own children just to get money? How is the question, or for Cathy, Chris, Carrie, and Cory, why? 

What the telling of Chris’s and Corrine’s point of view, for me, would have made the book more interesting. Cathy’s point of view makes me love the book-but I’d like to know what it was like for the mother to see her children die then become successful later, when they hate her. I’d like to know what it would be like for the one who loved the mother the most, to slowly realize the mother loved money more than them. I don’t think that if it had been told from their point of view they couldn’t have ‘drowned out’ Cathy’s voice. Cathy is a headstrong dancer; a bit like her mother when she wants things to go her way-as in she would do anything to get it. Cathy’s version shows what she would do to get her revenge on her mother. Chris wouldn’t really do anything just try and stop Cathy but ending up failing. Corrine would just mourn, wanting her children back and wanting to reverse her mistakes. Cathy shows the step by step of what she does to get her revenge, she shows her struggles, her anger, the mistakes she made, the things she pleads. But either way, any view from there’s would have been awesome to hear from…maybe even the little twins, the most innocent, would have been nice to read…or maybe even a person from the outside trying to tell the Dollanganger’s twisted story.

The Lost Hero

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The Lost Hero by Rick Riordan

I have recently read a book called The Lost Hero by Rick Riordan which has many complex and difficult things about friendship, power, and loyalty. There are 3 main characters, Jason Grace, Leo Valdez, and Piper McLean. There all just demigods trying to save the meanest Goddess of Olympus before she’s eaten by a giant who will use her power to rise and destroy the Earth-which is also complicated for Piper’s sake.

Piper McLean-daughter of famous actor Tristan McLean and Aphrodite the goddess of love-has a lot of difficulties she has to choose through. . She holds a terrible secret-the secret that’s making her decide from the life and death of her friends and family.  If she chooses family, then her friends die. If she chooses her friends, then her father dies. She’s close to her friends but really loves her dad since he’s all the family he has left.  And because it’s her secret, she can’t really tell anyone, also since the secret has promised if she did then her father would be killed before she could do anything. She doesn’t want to betray her friends, but she also can’t let her father die.

That’s also not the only problem she’s facing. She’s also facing a bit of power-problems. When she first goes to Camp Half-Blood she meet’s the counselor for the Aphrodite cabin-Drew-who she immediately doesn’t like because Drew is described to describe her as a ‘week-old burrito that had just been pulled out of a Dumpster’ and because Drew was trying to get together with Jason-Piper’s crush. As Piper gets to know Drew she feels like she thinks everything is a game and doesn’t really know how to run a cabin since she feels that every Aphrodite child should look gorgeous and people should adore them. When she gets back from the Quest of trying to save the world, Piper challenges Drew to who gets to run the cabin, though she doesn’t really want to, if she gets to be the Cabin Leader than she’ll be given attention which she wouldn’t like. 

Jason Grace’s-son of Zeus-problems are difficult, probably not as difficult at Piper’s. One day he wakes up in the school bus-having no memories only others seeming to have memories of him. Later he figures out that Hera-the goddess that has been captured-has been the one who’s taken his memories. He has to decide between able to get back his memories and being able to walk away from the quest or staying with Piper and Leo-his only friends-help with the quest, and not having his memories back immediately but in due time. Jason wants his memories back since he hates not knowing anything-not even his favorite food, color, or age. But when he wakes up at the school bus, and then spends some time with Piper and Leo he feels like he shouldn’t leave them. He also feels like if he gets his memories back he might start hating Piper, Leo, and the other demigods in Camp Half-Blood, and that’s something he doesn’t want to do-he wants to stick by his friends’ sides, even if it means he doesn’t get his memories, which he will not like. 

Leo Valdez’s-the son of Hephaestus and Esperanza Valdez- is also the one with problems he has to face. First off, he blames himself for the death of his mother though he knows that Mother Earth-Gaia-was setting him up, getting him to worry about her mother’s lock up in her shop, and accidently setting it on fire. He knows it was Gaia who set it up-trying to lower his confidence-but he also blames himself. Fire’s making Leo’s life difficult since he’s been told that a child of Hephaestus is really bad luck for the people around him, but he feels like he’s already done so much damage, his own family-his aunt really-thinks he’s crazy and wouldn’t take him in when he lost his mother-doesn’t want anything to do with him. All of Leo’s life he’s been neglected, the fire thing really isn’t helping him trying to keep things okay.

The Lost Hero the heroes face many problems-emotionally and physically. Though they really are a pain to them, and rather difficult, these problems help Piper, Jason, and Leo become wiser in more ways than one. Piper learns that Aphrodite Children are really about being loving and spreading beauty throughout the world. Jason learned things like friendship is worth more than the memories he’ll get back in due time. And Leo learned that not every child with fire powers is bad, people have just misjudged them based off other accidents happening. Heroes can face many problems like these 3 did, but in most cases they’re good lesson-learners, but also,  those lesson-learners can have a twist to them…

Dead Beautiful

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I have recently finished reading the book Dead Beautiful by Yvonne Woon. It’s about how a girl named Renee Winters, a Californian, clumsy girl, who finds her parents in a nearby forest, dead. It seems to confuse Renee because she finds it nearly impossible for both of them having to die at the same time, with coins surrounding them, and cloths shoved in their mouths, especially since they’re supposed to be at work, which is about an hour away from where their bodies are. After the funeral, Renee’s grandfather-who Renee is certain of that her parents hated-comes into Renee’s life, he lets her mourn for a few days, then tells her that she’s gonna go attend Gottfried Academy, an ‘elite boarding school’ in Maine. He sends her there because he feels like she will be safer there since like Renee, he believes that her parents’ death is no accident.  Renee is reluctant to go, but ends up going, she soon finds out what the school has very dangerous secrets. 

There’s one secret that the school refuses to talk about, and tries really hard to not let the students there find out. But Renee is determined to find out, even if it means she can get killed like the other students who have died there. Students like Cassandra Millet and Benjamin Gallow have been in on the secret, now they’re dead, even Renee’s best friend Eleanor, ends up dying-but she wasn’t on the secret, her brother way though…every year the school has a test, to see who is ‘smart and bright’ enough to be able to be on The Board Of Monitors, a very fancy way to describe the ‘hall monitors’ basically. But there’s also one catch with being on that, they’re in on the secret too.  Renee tries to get the secret by getting Eleanor to ask her brother since basically, he would tell her anything, but it doesn’t seem to be enough, all Eleanor can get out that makes Renee really suspicious is that, the students who’ve died, Ben and Cassandra and Eleanor, have died the exact way Renee’s parents have-with coins and cloths. 

Renee ends up reading about Gottfried’s past, all that she can find which is an utter shock to her, is that, there were others students who have died, and they’ve died the same way, cloths and coins, in the beginning of the story, when Renee found her parents, and she questioned the police about it, they had told her that the reason they had died, was because they both had heart attacks. Renee clearly did not believe it, how could both of her parents have heart attacks at the same time? They may have been close but they weren’t that close that they could have planned their own deaths at the same time. Now, since it says the other students have died there the same way, Renee believes they’re hiding something big, how could all those young kids have a heart attack when they were perfectly healthy?

 

But to uncover that secret, Renee needs to uncover the secret of her boyfriend’s identify, Dante Berlin. When Dante-star student, high grades, and everything-first meets Renee, Eleanor is there, describing ‘the guy who sits next to her during the Fall Assembly’ to be Dante. She says that Dante never talks to anyone, and in the Assembly, to Eleanor’s shock, Dante talks to Renee. Soon, Renee finds herself attracted to Dante, but not in the-oh he’s so cute kinda way, more like, there’s something very familiar about him…I can’t put my finger on it though…kinda way. They end up hanging out, Renee also feels more alive near him, as Dante feels to her-though he probably won’t admit it. Through classes like Latin, they become closer and closer. (I know, it doesn’t seem important-oh she gets a romantic relationship with the mysterious guy of the school, yeah big deal, so what? Well it is so hold up, please?) When Renee reads about the Gottfried past she finds out a few things…things that sorta match up Dante’s mysterious personality. Cold Skin all the time, afraid of underground, won’t kiss anyone. (Dante does this, yes, to make it clear.) As Renee reads she finds the words: Basium Mortis which is basically Latin for having your soul taken from you, or kiss of death. ‘I turned the page. The pictures were disturbing. They showed children sucking the souls out of other children. Their faces looked hungry and bestial, driven by animal cravings. Though strangely, I thought, it looked like they were kissing. The realization struck me, and I sat up and gasped. Kissing. Dante refused to kiss me on the lips. This must be why. A kiss could kill me.’ Soon, Renee connects it…and she finds out Dante is one of the undead children, one of the children from the age of 21 and below who have died and their soul has left their body, now the body wands the Earth looking for their soul, and in order for him to live without his soul, Renee finds out, that he has to suck out the souls of other people or he’ll die. (Wow, must be a bummer o.o having to find out your boyfriend could kill you anytime he wanted, and that he’s dead…) But that’s not all…Renee also uncovers that she holds Dante’s lost soul, and he could one kiss, Renee could die, Dante could live again till he dies again for good.

Finding that out, Renee learns that the other students, Ben, Eleanor, her parents, they’ve all died by Basium Mortis, the kiss of death, by the undead children who want to live. She has uncovered the secret of Gottfried...but at what cost? Finding that out, one of the BOM (Board of Monitors) people-Gideon-wants to kill her, for some reason he has hated her since the beginning of the school. He tries to,  but Dante gets in the way, he ends up killing Dante but Renee saves him, giving him the kiss of life (yes, bad pun…I know). Renee lives though; Dante kisses her back and gives her back her, his…their soul, him becoming the undead again, and Gideon getting away.

Through this long story plot, Renee learns a few things, for one that, sometimes you have to look in your past to understand that future. When they were alive, Renee’s parents used to make her tell them back old theories that they told her. She had to look back at that to figure out all the connections between Dante, the BOM, the deaths of children, the death of her parents, and the death of her friend. Looking back Renee accepted that her boyfriend was the undead that people in her school where the undead and the BOM were just people that made sure the undead stayed in line. (Yes, the undead have requirements, read the book, it’ll explain more.) Looking back…Renee learned to understand everything that has happened.

Never-More!

MAY CONTAIN SOME SPOILERS!

Never-More by James Patterson

I have recently finished Never-More by James Patterson, the last book in the Maximum Ride Series (Great series, in my opinion-you should read!). It’s about how Maximum Ride (Or Max) must save the world; she’s been told that the end of the world and it’s up to her to save it, that, or perish along with the ones destined to die-some mutants can only live. Max could probably save the world or some of it anyway, but there are many things stopping her. One thing, which is a big problem, Max must decide if she wants to be with either Dylan-new flock member, considered Max’s ‘perfect other half’- or Fang-Quiet independent guy who Max has known all her life. Now, I know what you’re thinking (Yes, I’m a mind reader, and I possibly know what you’re thinking) Why is romance so big when the world is about to end?  

But, think of it this way, Max can save the world, but she needs someone with her, she would have her other flock members-Iggy, Nudge, or Gazzy-with her to fight, but she feels they’re too young. (Also, it’s mentioned in the others books-so it might be really important, no?) So, Max needs to choose between the one made for her-Dylan-or the one she thinks is made for her really-Fang, before the whole world ends, or they all die. But there are problems with that. For one, Fang is gone; he thought that it was best for him to leave since he’s been told that he can danger Max and the whole Flock, leaving Max heart-broken. But, he comes back-but that’s bad too, since Max has already had complications with him leaving, so coming back, she just won’t be able to take it-especially since she’s gotten closer to Dylan.  (Way to go Fang…)And for another, Fang is destined to die-the School scientists-where they were trapped and experimented on since they’re kids with wings-want to kill Fang, because while doing an experiment, they found out that Fang has something in his DNA that could lead the world ending, or something more disastrous. 

Okay, stop right there! I may know what you’re thinking, Fang has something that could kill the world, and Max has to save the world from being killed, doesn’t that mean that Fang has to be killed or something? Well, no, Fang does not have to die! (Kill him; there will be hell to pay-he’s a good person!) Fang may hold something that could kill, but it doesn’t mean he doesn’t know how to use it (he doesn’t, he only knows) also, Fang isn’t bad; it’s the scientists that want to test with his DNA. And because of that, Fang is being hunted down by Erasers-half men, half wolf, super vicious-and other people, insisting that he must die before anything bad can happen.

Okay, let’s go to Dylan, enough about Fang. Firstly, Dylan was made for Max, he was programmed to love her and her only, and he’d do anything for her (Sweet, right?). He follows her anywhere, protects her, and tells her things that the School tells him. (No, he’s not working for the School, the School wants Dylan to be with Max, as much as he does-it’s part of the whole Saving-the-world Game.) Now, remember when anything meant anything, and how Dylan had contact with the School? Well, Dylan has been given a mission from them-something he could possibly benefit from-killing Fang. Dylan knows as well as Max Fang could kill the world if people got his hands on him, so he’s like, killing Fang won’t be so bad, the world is being saved, right? Also, killing Fang gives Dylan an increase of winning Max’s heart. (Just so you know, Max kinda likes Dylan but not as much as she loves Fang so…) So, Dylan teams up a bit with the School when the major battle is taking place-and tries to kill Fang-only being stopped by Max’s pleas and fleeing from the scene, leaving a shocked Max, Flock, and injured everyone, crying in pain. 

Max, now, has made her choice, though she’s kinda liked Dylan; he crossed the line trying to hurt Fang, plus, she feels more comfortable with Fang-she’s known him all her life, Dylan only for about 2 months, feeling the pressure of him wanting to be with her.

And now it’s the end. Max and Fang must save the world, though, they also need to keep Fang safe, which they kinda do by going to some Island which was designed to save them, and keep them safe while the world is destroyed. Fang and the Flock want to relax on the island, but Max feels like she doesn’t feel herself…if she doesn’t save the world, she feels she was designed to the save the world, relaxing isn’t gonna cut it for her. So she has to take action. Which she does when the sky to go on fire and fall down upon them, now Max has to do something, Fang choosing to help her while the others on the island go into a cave that’s so superior it can protect them from all of it. This is around the time where Dylan comes back. Though, Max hates it, it’s Dylan who tells them about the sky, who gets some to safety, and it’s Dylan who still wants to help Max, even though he knows she will never choose hm.  But, sadly, Max cannot save herself from the fiery-sky, she and Fang try, by flying but they end up failing, burning together…dying…

Or so it seems. Dylan comes back, saving Max and Fang from death, from death of the burning sky, just as Max is saying (she’s talking to the reader): ‘before I go, even if you’ve rolled your eyes at every bit of cheesy advise I pulled out my butt when the flocked needed some pep in their patooties these last few years, know that I mean this last little nugget from the bottom of my not-really-cynical little freak heart: Save your world. Love it, protect it, and respect it, and don’t let haters represent it. Don’t leave the saying to anyone else, ever, because exhibit A-why, hello there!-it’s way too much for one person. And if you want to skip out on the responsibility train, my whole life-and death-will have been in vain. It’s yours. It’s all yours for the taking! You’re not going to waste it now, are you?’ Patterson is basically telling the reader, that you shouldn’t let ‘bad people’ take over the world, and experiment on it which could be bad for the world; you have to help change it, before everything happens to what happened to the Maximum Ride people. And basically that whole romance thing he put in there, he put that in there to show, that you can’t help save the world alone, it’s too much, just like Max said, people need others to survive…or everything just crumbles…so it’s time to step up…help save the world…before it’s too late...before no one can fly anymore.